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Nov. 23rd, 2005 09:35 amSo there I was trying to Micro Machine the flavors for the coffee that we offer, and on the phone with Shri, when all of a sudden my tongue got all excited and invented a new flavor:
Toasted Ominous.
"Yes, gimme a medium two and two and, hmm...a shot of Toasted Ominous--I feel like a little foreboding before I get to the meeting."
By the way, you authors out there. Dialogue. Very important to get that right. Also, throw some punctuation in that shit. If you're gonna have the dude say, "Hey man check this out," then give some sort of indication that he's saying it rather fast, otherwise, throw them little bendy bitches in and have him do it like this:
"Hey, man--check this out."
"Hey, man, check this out."
Fuck--like i know anything, right?
Toasted Ominous.
"Yes, gimme a medium two and two and, hmm...a shot of Toasted Ominous--I feel like a little foreboding before I get to the meeting."
By the way, you authors out there. Dialogue. Very important to get that right. Also, throw some punctuation in that shit. If you're gonna have the dude say, "Hey man check this out," then give some sort of indication that he's saying it rather fast, otherwise, throw them little bendy bitches in and have him do it like this:
"Hey, man--check this out."
"Hey, man, check this out."
Fuck--like i know anything, right?
